writting mistakes

[(?) Nell]

If you've written Sth that you'r not sure about it put it here to find out and correct your mistakes(grammer,naturally and other mistakes) with the other's helps​

 

[Narcissus]

پاسخ : writting mistakes

I'm ready to correct your mistakes!!
As usual!

 

[(?) Nell]

پاسخ : writting mistakes

I'm ready to correct your mistakes!!
As usual!

let see !!!
solly had planed a feast. sh wasn't incompetent but it was the first time and she hadn't askd for help of her folks
she couldn't chill out she just kept telling herself do one thing at a time. but she was pointing finger at herself
she was afraid of saatage the partty her anxuisty was clear on her face. she asked herself was she ok? she needed help , had she cleend the hous what about the decoration? she should had asked for help, soddenly she screemed didn't lecture her, she's ok
but one thing was cler she was covering herself. she wasn't ok and she realized it by the tone on her voice
she hadn't seen that comming. she regret not asking for help. but it was too late so she canceld the partty to rest and now she's really callm​

 

[Narcissus]

پاسخ : writting mistakes

First of all correct your spelling mistakes!
The I'll correct your grammatical mistakes!

 

[(?) Nell]

پاسخ : writting mistakes

First of all correct your spelling mistakes!
The I'll correct your grammatical mistakes!

sorry I don't have a head for it
if you can please​

 

[Narcissus]

پاسخ : writting mistakes

let see !!!
solly had planed a feast. sh wasn't incompetent but it was the first time and she hadn't askd for help of her folks
she couldn't chill out she just kept telling herself do one thing at a time. but she was pointing finger at herself
she was afraid of saatage the partty her anxuisty was clear on her face. she asked herself was she ok? she needed help , had she cleend the hous what about the decoration? she should had asked for help, soddenly she screemed didn't lecture her, she's ok
but one thing was cler she was covering herself. she wasn't ok and she realized it by the tone on her voice
she hadn't seen that comming. she regret not asking for help. but it was too late so she canceld the partty to rest and now she's really callm​

What are these words?!
correct the spelling mistakes!
She asked her self she was OK or not!
for any help!
it has some other problems but i have to read it again!
check them,then I'll read it again!
B-)

 

[(?) Nell]

پاسخ : writting mistakes

Solly had planed a feast. She wasn't incompetent but it was the first time and she hadn't asked for help of her folks
she couldn't chill out she just kept telling herself do one thing at a time. But she was pointing finger at herself
she was afraid of sabotage the party her anxiety was clear on her face. She asked herself was she ok? (Indirect) She needed help, had she cleaned the house what about the decoration? She should had asked for help, suddenly she screamed didn't lecture her, she's ok
but one thing was clear she was covering herself. She wasn't ok and she realized it by the tone on her voice
she hadn't seen that coming. She regrets not asking for help(i can't find out what's rong with it). But it was too late so she canceled the party to rest and now she's really calm​

 

[Narcissus]

پاسخ : writting mistakes

She regrets not asking for help(i can't find out what's rong with it)

"any help " is better!