Your Own Poems

[EhsanJ]

Hi. In this topic you can put the poems you wrote. i start by putting some of mine. hope you enjoy it.... x​

 

[EhsanJ]

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[ltr]My Dream, Locked Within

I have a dream now locked within
in search of one receptive heart
To hear it soon invite it in
before I take it and depart

I told forsaken heart of mine
Reveal your dreams of love entire
Within the loved one's heart divine
And with a thousand tongues of fire

But can one tell a dream to dream?
Can light reveal its rays to light?
Or can the moon without its beam
Reveal its face through dark of night?
[/ltr]

 

[EhsanJ]

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Until We Meet Again

If I could change the course of time
I would fly back with speed sublime
Until I found that mystic gate
Where life began and ask our fate
To fix your course of life anew
And mine with that new course in view
Without a trace of loss or gain
Until our souls would meet again​

 

[EhsanJ]

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Lust, The Passing Wave

My eyes can see the ocean waves above
But not the ocean depths far deep below
And so it is with lust's domain and love
One lures awhile and one fore will grow​

 

[جیران]

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wowwwwww
its very good
bravo
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[EhsanJ]

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wowwwwww
its very good
bravo

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[/ltr]Thank you. i wrote this one for you, dedicated to you ... x
A Moment of Brief

Love is one moment brief
Within two lovers' hearts
Its climax reaches, ends
Within the mood it starts
But in the timeless flow
Of infinite, I know
Our loves and lives are but
Two brief and fleeting parts[/ltr]​

 

[جیران]

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[/ltr]Thank you. i wrote this one for you, dedicated to you ... x
A Moment of Brief

Love is one moment brief
Within two lovers' hearts
Its climax reaches, ends
Within the mood it starts
But in the timeless flow
Of infinite, I know
Our loves and lives are but
Two brief and fleeting parts[/ltr]
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wow
tnx
oh my God
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[جیران]

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really i think the title of ur poems are whizzbang
and themes and alignment of word are very well​

 

[negginnium]

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wow! Thank you! I really enjoyed of reading them...!
here is my ONLY english poem...not a poem, just something like it!... but certainly its not well as yours

Your name, dsnt have pain, its a holly rain, without shame,just sometmes a little Cry at the main...

as i told u I cnt call it a poem cause its too weak, but ive wrote this for someone i liked too much, and every word of this has full of meaning,for myself

thnx DEAD,for ur beautiful poems,and for creating this topic!
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[جیران]

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wow! Thank you! I really enjoyed of reading them...!
here is my ONLY english poem...not a poem, just something like it!... but certainly its not well as yours

Your name, dsnt have pain, its a holly rain, without shame,just sometmes a little Cry at the main...

as i told u I cnt call it a poem cause its too weak, but ive wrote this for someone i liked too much, and every word of this has full of meaning,for myself

thnx DEAD,for ur beautiful poems,and for creating this topic!
​

wow dear that was great and full of sensation
bravo ​

 

[negginnium]

پاسخ : Your Own Poems

thnx , dear mina :)

 

[EhsanJ]

پاسخ : Your Own Poems

wow! Thank you! I really enjoyed of reading them...!
here is my ONLY english poem...not a poem, just something like it!... but certainly its not well as yours

Your name, dsnt have pain, its a holly rain, without shame,just sometmes a little Cry at the main...

as i told u I cnt call it a poem cause its too weak, but ive wrote this for someone i liked too much, and every word of this has full of meaning,for myself

thnx DEAD,for ur beautiful poems,and for creating this topic!
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Oh thanx this is really flattering. and ur poem is awesome don't say its weak cuz it ain't. and thank you i ain't that good :) x and btw im not DEAD, I'm DREAD. But thanx for reading my topic :) xxx​

really i think the title of ur poems are whizzbang
and themes and alignment of word are very well​

Thanx honey but they ain't that good. thanks for reading them... :) x​

wow dear that was great and full of sensation
bravo ​

Agree :)x​

 

[EhsanJ]

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Norms of Life

It seems to me the truth is plain and clear
That man's beliefs are signs if inner fear
Though they may all in multiforms appear
In lofty tones serene, sublime and clear

Our grand and firm philosophies so strong
Our many faiths and codes of right and wrong
Our art and science, our values old or young
To dreams and hope they cling, they all belong

Our norms may keep our mind and soul at ease
For they survive as long as they help - Please
At best they warm our hearts, at worst they freeze
And as they fail to move our lives, they cease​

 

[EhsanJ]

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Wow this old topic of mine... well take a look at it. if y'all like i can post more of my poems here and i'd love to read yours if you have any... x​

 

[negginnium]

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yes yes please

 

[tressa]

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^-^
not possible travel to you
not possible wait in blue
i should only
wait
wait
and wait
until this hope come true...

(grammatical problem? I don't know)

 

[EhsanJ]

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[ltr]Love is Complete

Love is the sun that shines in skies of soul
Love is the wine divine, our soul its bowl
Love ties your heart with mine with every beat
And as mine blends with yours, love is complete[/ltr]

yes yes please

[ltr]Sorry for the long absence...[/ltr]

 

[EhsanJ]

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[ltr]An Angel's Touch

A woman died, her years around a hundred four
Her face in wrinkled lines, her beauty was no more
So as she rose, ascended on to heaven for prize
She reached the blissful gate of promised paradise
Then there appeared at entrance gate a hansome sage
Proclaimed, there is no room in here for old in age
In paradise its residents are fit and strong
Their beauties are unmatched, their hearts remain young
The sorry old and wrinkled dame began to leave
But as she turned an angel sweet said, I believe
That youthful sage did not reveal that I possess
A magic touch that gives to age its youth, no less
The angel touched her face, the lady changed within
Regained her beauty and her youth, was welcomed in[/ltr]